Novel Beginning Judging Page

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    PLEASE CHOOSE ONE ANSWER FOR EACH QUESTION
    Hook:
    Question 1
    Does the story open with a compelling hook that makes you want to continue reading?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Setting:
    Question 2
    Does the setting provide a believable, appropriate and/or natural framework for the story?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 3
    Are the main characters multidimensional with evidence that they are have weaknesses as well as strengths?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 4
    Is the protagonist sufficiently interesting to produce empathy (or at least curiosity) in the reader?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 5
    Does the conflict arise believably from the characters’ motivations and goals?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 6
    Is there sufficient conflict (internal and/or external) to sustain the reader’s interest?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 7
    By the end of the story, does the reader have a strong sense of satisfaction that the conflict has been resolved and that the character has grown and changed?    
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Dialogue/Narrative/POV:
    Question 8
    Do the dialogue and narrative provide characterization and move the story and/or relationships forward?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 9
    Does the author present the work with a distinctive voice and an engaging style of expression?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 10
    Is each character’s voice consistent and appropriate for his/her age, education, gender, ethnicity, etc.? 
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 11
    Is point of view handled correctly?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 12
    Is the dialogue natural, not stilted or overly narrative?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Mechanics:
    Question 13 
    Is the entry presented professionally and following the format required by the contest? Is the manuscript free of typographical, spelling, and punctuation errors?     
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 14 
    Is the story told in a clear and focused manner without annoying overuse of adjectives and adverbs?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 15
    Is the work without grammar errors; or, if errors exist, are they necessary for the story’s atmosphere?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Pacing/Flow:
    Question 16
    Does each scene have a clear and necessary relationship with the scenes that precede and follow it?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 17
    Does the proportion of showing versus telling produce an active and engaging story flow?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 18
     Are the necessary backstory and exposition presented in an artful and well-balanced manner via narration and/or dialogue?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Question 19
    Is the pacing appropriate for the unfolding story – does it move rapidly enough to sustain interest?
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential
    Effectiveness/Reader Response:
    Question 20
    Candidly assess the total impact of this short story. Realistically evaluate its likelihood of enticing a successful editor to publish it.
    Use these Guidelines:
    3- Excellent- Almost ready for publication as is
    2- Solid- But could benefit from refinement
    1- In Process- needs substantial work to meet its potential

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